
Here, I have improved the house stlye to a striking yet edgy black and red to appeal to a wider audience. I have included real screen shots from the film to reveal more about the narrative, I think it looks more authentic and themed towards an NME arcticle with the logo. I've used a mixture of font sizes and colours for the headline, for a quirky effect that captures the attention of the reader. The style of the journalism is semi-formal with direct adress to the audience and istances of metaphors and humor to entertain the reader, yet explains the premise of the film clearly and cohesively. I think it works well as a review whilst giving extra information about the director as well as the Edinbrugh Film festival, provding links for where the film can be viewed as well as the premier date.